Deep Poem?

The wind, the earth, the sea…

Throw in some emotion,

Blast it with imagery…

What does it take to write a deep poem?

Maybe a high school kid knows what it is.

Say what?

When I was in second year high school, we had to perform one of our poems in front of class. One of my classmates approached me after and said “Ang ganda ng poem mo, ang deep.” I was glad, but when I asked her if she could comment about the message of the poem, she said “Hindi ko alam. Hindi ko maintindihan eh. Basta maganda.

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